“ I heard a loud explosion in the science laboratory what was that” I quickly ran to the main science room.The explosion I heard was as loud as a big gun shooting it’s target.I wasn’t allowed inside so I peeked through the window.They put something inside a big jar, “BOOM” the sound come back again I think they were trying to study baking soda reacting to a big giant class of vinegar.
Yesterday we edited our little story we made last week we used DRAFT (Delete,Rearrange,Add,Fix and Talk) to make our story sound better.I used Onomatopoeia,Fanboys,Adjectives and many more, to make my little story interesting.
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