Sentence Structure

       

Today we  got taught how to make your sentences better with using the 5 w's (Who,What,When,Where and Why) .I worked with my class mate Zahra. Our learning attention  is to use the 5 w's to make our sentances more interesting. So for example my story started with The dog.Then I would add in what "The dog barked loud".I would use one of the 5 w's when so I would change it to " In the morning the dog barked loud. Now Where it would take place " In the morning the dog barked loud in his kennel".The last W why so the sentence would sound like this. In the Morning the dog barked loud in his kennel because he was hungry.